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Falling Away

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We stood at the very highest peak,
And looking down, you started to scoff,
"Baby, you're so perfect,
Why don't you jump off?"
I tried to protest,
"I don't have wings,
I cannot fly!"
But you laughed and pushed me anyway,
Maybe you hoped I would die.
And then I was falling fast,
At a most dizzying pace,
Yet all I could see
Was your disapproving face.
And then I hit the ground,
And I hit so hard
I was left with nothing,
Just a little shard.
And I lay there,
My little glass heart broken,
And all I could remember
Was the last words you'd spoken.
You said, "My dear,
It pains me to see you like this"
But I refused to accept
That one last kiss.
My heart was begging
For just one more chance
But my feet ached
And they would not dance.
So I picked up the broken pieces,
Gathered them together,
And I said my last goodbye.
Goodbye forever.
I have no clue what inspired this or where it came from. I just made it up.
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fallingstar584's avatar
Wow, I was just browsing through your gallery again and I came to this one. Again (haha I probably posted this already, ages ago) I love it! Brilliant writing and metaphor, I still remember this one after this long.

I haven't really commented on most of your other writing, but really, I love your style of writing. None of it ever gets boring and they, well they all come on strong. You have a different way of looking at things I guess?