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Forget what you meant to me by *Emocinderella:iconEmocinderella:



The damage's been done,
      I must pick up the broken pieces
              And leave behind the memories
                         I must leave you,
                                and my love for you in the past.
It's time for me to forget.
I'll forget the memories that haunt me
                      And the way I fell for you so easily.
I'll forget that we carved our names
     Into that tree we called ours
           That we walked by and kissed under
                      So many summer days ago.
I'll forget it was supposed to mean forever.
And I'll forget the way your lips felt
        Pressed against mine
                      As the rain poured down all around
                                       In our faces and our hair.
I'll forget it was supposed mean I missed you.
Every second you were away
It'll become nothing to me,
            Just another nameless faceless memory...
I'll forget the foolish things we said
                   That we'd run away and never come back
                               Change our names
                                           And disappear together forever.
it doesn't matter anymore.
i don't matter anymore...

                                   And I'll just forget how our hands
             Fit together more perfectly than the pieces of a puzzle...
    it didn't stop your hand from
                                               slipping away
                                                                 From mine
                                                                              in the end.
I will forget...
          it was supposed to mean I needed you.
But I'll move on
I'll hold up my head
And smile at you like a stranger.
As if I don't know you the way I do,
And soon,
                                                I'll forget that I loved you.
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Author's Comments

Yeah....so I wrote this...and it just seemed to be missing something....so i messed around with it and changed it around and stuff...what do you think?
Btw....I cried while writing this...I don't normally cry from my own poetry.

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:icondnmph:
:( I think this is probably my favourite piece of poetry from you. So sad, perhaps its the knowlage that it's true, or that I know what it feels like. Perhaps it's just that good of a poem. I don't know what it is, but whatever it is, it works, and its sad as holy hell and i love it for it.

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We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different!
:iconfabulocity21:
Oh my god, this is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!! Perfectly explores the wonders and hurts of loving and letting go. Are you truly doing it?? Are you truly going to move on?? If so, I'm so proud of you and I barely know you!!!! I love this, I love how you wrote it with the bold and the italics. Very emotional, I like it a lot!!!!!!

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I'm falling faster and faster and I don't want to stop.
:iconemocinderella:
Thank you. I think I agree it's my best....or at least my most sincere.
:iconmeeden:
the bold and italics grab hold and sink into the heart as you read this - wonderfully written with such emotions - true sad - sometimes poetry from within the sadess escapes us onto paper! nicely written :silentkitty:
p.s. i wouldn't change a thing about it!
:iconemocinderella:
Thank you. And yay, you got the whole idea of the italics and bolded phrases!
:icondnmph:
Mmmhmm, definitly. I like the use of fonts too

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We are here on Earth to fart around. Don't let anybody tell you any different!
:iconemocinderella:
i honestly do not know. I want to, because i know I've been hanging on for too long now, but goodness, just writing this poem and thinking about life without him in it...it's just sad. But I'm going to try now. I'm gonna let him slip away from me.
:iconfabulocity21:
Yes!!! Good for you!!!!!! I'm here if you need me, and you have my myspace, if you need anything, I promise I am here every step of the way. You're young, you'll heal, and trust me, you have so much to experience before you give your heart away.

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I'm falling faster and faster and I don't want to stop.

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