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I promise Ill break your heart by *Emocinderella:iconEmocinderella:



"I promise I'll break your heart..."
I whispered to him
In the dark of the backseat,
"You can't trust a girl like me..."
I was just lonely
It didn't mean a thing
"I'm only seventeen...."
He didn't mind,
We'll just have a good time
"So unsure...so naive.."
But I closed my eyes
And I made believe...

I pretended I cared
I pretended I was beautiful
And I pretended I was with you
Instead of this
....George, Bill, or Joe?
Does it really matter?
I'll disappear tomorrow.
I warned him not to try to find me...
"I promise I'll break your heart"
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It's an interesting thing being broken, isn't it?

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:icondragondreamzero:
wow. that is good. i like it. i agree.

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Always Rhyme like a Dreamer..
Staying True like a Believer..
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:iconallaricdeschain:
if only they made emotional glue...and it was easier to find

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"Artists are those who can evade the verbose"-Kafka on the Shore
:iconxjamie-chaosx:
that is amazing!
i love this

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the girls a straight up hustler :/
:iconmellowghost:
Hmmm.... a social experiment?
:iconv-8:
Damn, chalk up another one for you Cindy. Your writing is killer, and I mean this in a good way, but this is just a venomous poem.

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Silence is deadly, so make some noise, turn up your radios and yell a little.
:iconksmsoccer89:
im not quite sure what to think of this. i like the beginning but i think it kinda falls out at the end. still a good poem though.

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Life can't get much better than this. Appreciate what you have while you have it.
:iconhopelesswithhope:
Wow, that's deep. As in, there's a deep meaning here. It is a very strange thing, being broken. But without brokenness, how can you feel the highs of completeness? I think this sounds excellent. =D
:iconemocinderella:
Yeah, I suppose I was doing some serious thinking when I wrote this.....just about the reasons for one's actions and the consequences that follow, and just about love, of course. You're right, a lot of times you have to be broken to learn. Thank you. ^_^
:iconemocinderella:
lol....you could say that....

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