Do you know What you do to me? You make me smile Every time you look at me. We laugh and joke You know just what to say But I hope you know You make me feel this way. I get all these silly butterflies And I can't hardly Look you in the eyes. When you call me beautiful I feel so, You make me blush And you always know And even though I've been sad for quite a while, You always know How to make me smile. |
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For the 100 themes challenge.
theme: Smile Also, I was gonna end it: "And if I'm not too shy than I'll Finally tell you how You make me smile" but idk if that sounded awkward...specially trying to rhyme smile with "I'll"....tell me what you think and if I should keep the one on there, or switch it. Comments
 wouldn't seem weird to me. read around and u'll see lines ending in the most unusual ways.
-- A person's heart hold's many things. Once a person truly opens their heart, however much time and trial that may take, to someone; then that someone is one that holds that person in highest respect. hmm.
 i like the ending that you didnt put in, but i like it the other way too.
is there any truth about this one?? just curious because your recent poems have been a bit sad, and i would be overjoyed to hear that you have someone to bring about that beautiful smile we seem to be seeing less and less these days. just curious. i hope so. . .  -- the years have been short, but the days go slowly by  beautiful words - and yet a even more beautiful smile behind them
  i like it a lot. and if you think the alternate ending will be awkard i gots a suggestion. and if i'm not too shy, i'll tell you why, you make me smile. possibly. i dunno. just trying to help. i like the poem a lot though
 -- It's not a matter of wether or not i can, it's a matter of wether or not it is worth it. lol thanks. And thanks for the suggestion.
...well...yes. ^_^
There is someone...and we both know we like each other, but we're holding off on starting anything. Still. We're both so silly when we're together. He makes me laugh so much. though I haven't told him that the poem's for him. lol. I feel like I'm back in middle school, when I had silly crushes. Aw thanks so much!! ^_^
you're welcome.
-- It's not a matter of wether or not i can, it's a matter of wether or not it is worth it. yeah, i know that crushing feeling, the butterflies, then the first kiss, then so on. it used to be so exciting, it still is, but not with that "new feeling" kind of exciting, its more just exciting you have found someone new to play with, and get to know, and have adventures with. . .
and i am glad to hear that your beautiful smile has returned to your face, and that brighter days are on their way. you deserve it. -- the years have been short, but the days go slowly by |
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