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This is my confession:

I dreamt you took my hand and put it to your lips, kissing each fingertip
my only sigh was, 'Oh love me'

confession:

your eyes washed over me like a tsunami
swept away
i drown,
           darling,
                      drown.

confession:

he will never replace you

and I know the day is quickly approaching

remember we always said when we were older
and now here I am.

and though you said I was bad at painting
you called me beautiful and that was enough

Another, worse, confession:

today I picked up my phone
and decided I would send you a message
I would tell you everything in a 60-lettered
little box

but I know that it would be wrong
to face a fear
only
half
way


and I only hope when you look at me
you still see the girl you fell in love with

because, I confess:

I see everything in you
and your whirlpool eyes

and my last confession:

this is truth.
I know this is truth
Sang like the sweetest song
On the sweetest, most unkissed lips

Also, I give the Inked_Page club permission to post my poem. Because i'm in that club. And I submitted this poem. because it's the first poem I've written in the past, like, forever, that I haven't just torn up and thrown away, disgusted that those sorts of crazy, desperate, mushy thoughts came out of my head.

You know, you could make things simple for me.

What are you waiting for?
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:iconprotorepublic:
ProtoRepublic Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2009
Loved this.
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Emocinderella Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
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Imkimmy4 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
*sigh* very beautiful!!!!!!!
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:iconemocinderella:
Emocinderella Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you! :hug:
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:iconimkimmy4:
Imkimmy4 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009
your welcome! :hug:
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tomorrow22 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
This is absolutely beautiful! That's really all I can say, it's beautiful.
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:iconemocinderella:
Emocinderella Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Awwh, thank you! I appreciate it!
:hug:
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:icontomorrow22:
tomorrow22 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure.
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KneelingGlory Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
The formatting worked really well in this piece, especially in the second "confession" :) :+fav:
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:iconemocinderella:
Emocinderella Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
^_^ Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it!
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