literature

I won't say a word

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I dressed up my prettiest
And avoided your eyes.
You never danced with me
And I never said goodbye

So much of me wants to say....

Say what I'm not allowed to say
How I begin to hope
Everytime you start to look my way
I do my best just to breathe
But, darling, don't you know
How you break me?

If you love her...
(I won't say a word)
If you forget me...
(Because I won't be heard)

I won't promise
I won't cry
You never danced with me
And I never said goodbye.
Ok, so I'm definitely liking what I did with this, but I still, (meticulous me,) think that it could be improved. So, it is still possibly going to change. I just think I could have put more emotion into it....I just don't know how...

oh and the real title is

If you love her (I won't say a word)
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alimayne's avatar
So emotive and simply heartbreaking. Beautiful <3